{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":false},"comments":[{"id":"52811514","dateCreated":"1334244804","smartDate":"Apr 12, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"jennifersmedsrud","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jennifersmedsrud","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/adami.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/52811514"},"dateDigested":1532145443,"commentId":"953201","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Be sure to use quotation marks &amp; ...","description":"Be sure to use quotation marks &amp; commas correctly with dialogue to avoid confusing your readers.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"DAWG, NO, YOU CAN'T RAM INTO THE SUPREME FIGHTER! Screamed Rose as I told her about my plan to stop Armytopia. I have to! I told her","dateCreated":"1334244804","user":{"username":"jennifersmedsrud","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jennifersmedsrud","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/319843744?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\"DAWG, NO, YOU CAN'T RAM INTO THE SUPREME FIGHTER!\" Screamed Rose as I told her about my plan to stop Armytopia. \"I have to!\" I told her","dateCreated":"1334765832","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/322163742?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\"Dawg, no, you can't ram the Supreme Fighter !\" screamed Rose as I told her about my plan to stop Armytopia. \"I have to!\" I told her","dateCreated":"1336335042","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/330758864?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\u200d\"Dawg, no, you can't ram the Supreme Fighter !\" screamed Rose as I told her about my plan to stop Armytopia. \"I have to!\" I told her","dateCreated":"1336501545","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/331987904?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\u200d\u200d\"Dawg, no, you can't ram the Supreme Fighter !\" screamed Rose as I told her about my plan to stop Armytopia. \"I have to!\" I told her","dateCreated":"1336503456","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/332006564?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"53205752","body":"Thank you... also, you do not capitalize the speaker tag in this case<br \/>\n<br \/>\nsupreme fighter!&quot; screamed Rose","dateCreated":"1335152887","smartDate":"Apr 22, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"jennifersmedsrud","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jennifersmedsrud","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"52811516","dateCreated":"1334244804","smartDate":"Apr 12, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"jennifersmedsrud","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jennifersmedsrud","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/adami.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/52811516"},"dateDigested":1532145443,"commentId":"864103","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: sentence fluency- I understand why yo...","description":"sentence fluency- I understand why you're using choppy sentences here, for dramatic effect, but make sure to capitalize &amp; punctuate correct to make it appear like a smooth, deliberate act on the author's part. : )<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI looked around and knew I was on planet 264, also known as Earth. On a section the earthlings call &quot;Florida&quot;. Thirty-two years away from my planet. I was in for a long wait.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"hh, I groaned as I walked off the pain of the crash. I looked around and knew I was on planet 264. Also known as Earth.","dateCreated":"1334244804","user":{"username":"jennifersmedsrud","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jennifersmedsrud","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/319843744?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"hh, I groaned as I walked off the pain of the crash. I looked around and knew I was on planet 264, Also known as Earth.","dateCreated":"1336335042","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/330758864?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\u200dhh, I groaned as I walked off the pain of the crash. I looked around and knew I was on planet 264, Also known as Earth.","dateCreated":"1336501545","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/331987904?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\u200d\u200dhh, I groaned as I walked off the pain of the crash. I looked around and knew I was on planet 264, Also known as Earth.","dateCreated":"1336503456","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/332006564?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"52811518","dateCreated":"1334244804","smartDate":"Apr 12, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"jennifersmedsrud","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jennifersmedsrud","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/adami.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/52811518"},"dateDigested":1532145443,"commentId":"205601","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Avoid using &quot;one hour later&quot...","description":"Avoid using &quot;one hour later&quot; to link events. Good writers can add narration to link events without relying on simple phrases. Go for it! : )","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"one hour later","dateCreated":"1334244804","user":{"username":"jennifersmedsrud","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jennifersmedsrud","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/319843744?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"CHAPTER 2 one hour later","dateCreated":"1334257096","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/319937684?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"CHAPTER 2 [Mid-America] {18 months until","dateCreated":"1334765967","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/322164934?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"CHAPTER 2 [Mid-America] {18 months until invasion]","dateCreated":"1335302153","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/324791814?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\u200dCHAPTER 2 [Mid-America] {18 months until invasion]","dateCreated":"1336501545","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/331987904?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\u200d\u200dCHAPTER 2 [Mid-America] {18 months until invasion]","dateCreated":"1336503456","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/332006564?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"52917370","dateCreated":"1334557448","smartDate":"Apr 15, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"jennifersmedsrud","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jennifersmedsrud","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/adami.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/52917370"},"dateDigested":1532145444,"commentId":"927486","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Please send me an email to let me kno...","description":"Please send me an email to let me know when you have your entire essay on your wiki page so I can finish looking it over.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"n axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and i screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. joey and madeline","dateCreated":"1334557448","user":{"username":"jennifersmedsrud","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jennifersmedsrud","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/320927350?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"n axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. joey and madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name. who's rose?\" She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home.","dateCreated":"1334765832","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/322163742?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"n axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. joey and madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name. who's rose?\" \"She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home\". I said. \"oh,well, if your done screaming , i'm going to bed.\"said joey. \"Okay.\" I said. as he left madeline stood there watching me. \"What are you doing?\" I asked.","dateCreated":"1334766627","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/322170618?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"n axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. joey and madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name. who's rose?\" \"She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home\". I said. \"oh,well, if your done screaming , i'm going to bed.\"said joey. \"Okay.\" I said. as he left madeline stood there watching me. \"What are you doing?\" I asked. \"Assessing the data I need to kill you.\" She answered. \"WHAT!\" I screamed. \"I'm going to kill you slowly and painfully.\" She replied. Then she pulled out a long, curved dagger. \"Oh.My.God!\" I yelled. Then I Sprung up and Ninja kicked her in the face. \"OW!\" she said. \"Why are you going to kill me! I demanded. \"3 reasons\". She said. First, I'm getting paid","dateCreated":"1334775186","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/322247986?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"n axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. joey and madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name. who's rose?\" \"She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home\". I said. \"oh,well, if your done screaming , i'm going to bed.\"said joey. \"Okay.\" I said. as he left madeline stood there watching me. \"What are you doing?\" I asked. \"Assessing the data I need to kill you.\" She answered. \"WHAT!\" I screamed. \"I'm going to kill you slowly and painfully.\" She replied. Then she pulled out a long, curved dagger. \"Oh.My.God!\" I yelled. Then I Sprung up and Ninja kicked her in the face. \"OW!\" she said. \"Why are you going to kill me! I demanded. \"3 reasons\". She said. \"First, I'm getting paid. Second, I am Determined to avenge the Supreme Fighter. And third, YOU KICKED ME!\" She said. \"oh man.\" I said. I jumped out my window screaming. Now I'm 5 times faster than an average human, so Madeline must have been genetically engineered or something because she caught up with me pretty fast. Then I jumped, Which I can jump 50 times higher than a Dolphin so I landed on a pretty tall building. I thought I was safe, until she scaled the wall. So I ran into the buildings skylight. She followed me, Bad move. Why? you ask because it was the army's C4 factory. so now all I had to was find a way to get at least one thing of C4 to explode on the big column and the building will crash right on her. it'll crash on me to but I can withhold the crash, it's the explosion that'll really hurt me.As soon as she landed i grabbed a C4 and threw it at her. She hit it away, but not fast enough for it not to sense her hand. And it exploded as soon as it hit the column. \"You Idiot!\" screamed Madeline. the building crashed, but not soon enough for her not to throw her knife at me. It hit my right side of my upper torso, it was pretty deep and hurt like a train would hurt a human. then the building fell on us and exploded.==<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc0\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday\"><\/a>Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc1\"><a name=\"x-&quot;Dawg, Dawg!&quot; Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. &quot;I'M AWAKE!&quot; I yelled. &quot;Do you always have to slap me?&quot; joey then said. &quot;No but I like to.&quot; How did you find me?&quot; i asked.&quot;The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.&quot; He started to cry. &quot;Joey I'm so sorry.&quot; I lied. &quot;It's okay&quot;, He said. &quot;i'm sure you didn't start the fire.&quot; okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. &quot;Oh and Dawg.&quot; said Joey. &quot;Yah.&quot; I asked. &quot;DIE!&quot; he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.\"><\/a>\"Dawg, Dawg!\" Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. \"I'M AWAKE!\" I yelled. \"Do you always have to slap me?\" joey then said. \"No but I like to.\" How did you find me?\" i asked.\"The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.\" He started to cry. \"Joey I'm so sorry.\" I lied. \"It's okay\", He said. \"i'm sure you didn't start the fire.\" okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. \"Oh and Dawg.\" said Joey. \"Yah.\" I asked. \"DIE!\" he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc2\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.\"><\/a>Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc3\"><a name=\"x-When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. &quot;Oh . . . peas.&quot;said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. &quot;Whoa.&quot;I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.&quot;Awesome.&quot; I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. &quot;I'll be home in a year.&quot; i said and i took off for home.\"><\/a>When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. \"Oh . . . peas.\"said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. \"Whoa.\"I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.\"Awesome.\" I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. \"I'll be home in a year.\" i said and i took off for home.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc4\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.\"><\/a>Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc5\"><a name=\"x-&quot;I'm finally here!&quot; I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. &quot;NO!!!&quot; I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. &quot;Dawg!&quot; she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.\"><\/a>\"I'm finally here!\" I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. \"NO!!!\" I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. \"Dawg!\" she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.<\/h2>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h1 id=\"toc6\"><a name=\"TO BE CONTINUED\"><\/a>TO BE CONTINUED<\/h1>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc7\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc8\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc9\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc10\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc11\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc12\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc13\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc14\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc15\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc16\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc17\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc18\"><\/h2>\n==","dateCreated":"1334782741","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/322306242?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"n axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. joey and madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name. who's rose?\" \"She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home\". I said. \"oh,well, if your done screaming , i'm going to bed.\"said joey. \"Okay.\" I said. as he left madeline stood there watching me. \"What are you doing?\" I asked. \"Assessing the data I need to kill you.\" She answered. \"WHAT!\" I screamed. \"I'm going to kill you slowly and painfully.\" She replied. Then she pulled out a long, curved dagger. \"Oh.My.God!\" I yelled. Then I Sprung up and Ninja kicked her in the face. \"OW!\" she said. \"Why are you going to kill me! I demanded. \"3 reasons\". She said. \"First, I'm getting paid. Second, I am Determined to avenge the Supreme Fighter. And third, YOU KICKED ME!\" She said. \"oh man.\" I said. I jumped out my window screaming. Now I'm 5 times faster than an average human, so Madeline must have been genetically engineered or something because she caught up with me pretty fast. Then I jumped, Which I can jump 50 times higher than a Dolphin so I landed on a pretty tall building. I thought I was safe, until she scaled the wall. So I ran into the buildings skylight. She followed me, Bad move. Why? you ask because it was the army's C4 factory. so now all I had to was find a way to get at least one thing of C4 to explode on the big column and the building will crash right on her. it'll crash on me to but I can withhold the crash, it's the explosion that'll really hurt me.As soon as she landed i grabbed a C4 and threw it at her. She hit it away, but not fast enough for it not to sense her hand. And it exploded as soon as it hit the column. \"You Idiot!\" screamed Madeline. the building crashed, but not soon enough for her not to throw her knife at me. It hit my right side of my upper torso, it was pretty deep and hurt like a train would hurt a human. then the building fell on us and exploded.==<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc0\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday\"><\/a>Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc1\"><a name=\"x-&quot;Dawg, Dawg!&quot; Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. &quot;I'M AWAKE!&quot; I yelled. &quot;Do you always have to slap me?&quot; joey then said. &quot;No but I like to.&quot; How did you find me?&quot; i asked.&quot;The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.&quot; He started to cry. &quot;Joey I'm so sorry.&quot; I lied. &quot;It's okay&quot;, He said. &quot;i'm sure you didn't start the fire.&quot; okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. &quot;Oh and Dawg.&quot; said Joey. &quot;Yah.&quot; I asked. &quot;DIE!&quot; he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.\"><\/a>\"Dawg, Dawg!\" Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. \"I'M AWAKE!\" I yelled. \"Do you always have to slap me?\" joey then said. \"No but I like to.\" How did you find me?\" i asked.\"The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.\" He started to cry. \"Joey I'm so sorry.\" I lied. \"It's okay\", He said. \"i'm sure you didn't start the fire.\" okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. \"Oh and Dawg.\" said Joey. \"Yah.\" I asked. \"DIE!\" he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc2\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.\"><\/a>Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc3\"><a name=\"x-When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. &quot;Oh . . . peas.&quot;said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. &quot;Whoa.&quot;I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.&quot;Awesome.&quot; I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. &quot;I'll be home in a year.&quot; i said and i took off for home.\"><\/a>When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. \"Oh . . . peas.\"said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. \"Whoa.\"I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.\"Awesome.\" I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. \"I'll be home in a year.\" i said and i took off for home.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc4\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.\"><\/a>Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc5\"><a name=\"x-&quot;I'm finally here!&quot; I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. &quot;NO!!!&quot; I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. &quot;Dawg!&quot; she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.\"><\/a>\"I'm finally here!\" I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. \"NO!!!\" I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. \"Dawg!\" she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.<\/h2>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h1 id=\"toc6\"><a name=\"TO BE CONTINUED\"><\/a>TO BE CONTINUED<\/h1>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc7\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc8\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc9\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc10\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc11\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc12\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc13\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc14\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc15\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc16\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc17\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc18\"><\/h2>\n==","dateCreated":"1335152888","user":{"username":"jennifersmedsrud","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jennifersmedsrud","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/324022410?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"n axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. joey and madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name. who's rose?\" \"She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home\". I said. \"oh,well, if your done screaming , i'm going to bed.\"said joey. \"Okay.\" I said. as he left madeline stood there watching me. \"What are you doing?\" I asked. \"Assessing the data I need to kill you.\" She answered. \"WHAT!\" I screamed. \"I'm going to kill you slowly and painfully.\" She replied. Then she pulled out a long, curved dagger. \"Oh.My.God!\" I yelled. Then I Sprung up and Ninja kicked her in the face. \"OW!\" she said. \"Why are you going to kill me! I demanded. \"3 reasons\". She said. \"First, I'm getting paid. Second, I am Determined to avenge the Supreme Fighter. And third, YOU KICKED ME!\" She said. \"oh man.\" I said. I jumped out my window screaming. Now I'm 5 times faster than an average human, so Madeline must have been genetically engineered or something because she caught up with me pretty fast. Then I jumped, Which I can jump 50 times higher than a Dolphin so I landed on a pretty tall building. I thought I was safe, until she scaled the wall. So I ran into the buildings skylight. She followed me, Bad move. Why? you ask because it was the army's C4 factory. so now all I had to was find a way to get at least one thing of C4 to explode on the big column and the building will crash right on her. it'll crash on me to but I can withhold the crash, it's the explosion that'll really hurt me.As soon as she landed i grabbed a C4 and threw it at her. She hit it away, but not fast enough for it not to sense her hand. And it exploded as soon as it hit the column. \"You Idiot!\" screamed Madeline. the building crashed, but not soon enough for her not to throw her knife at me. It hit my right side of my upper torso, it was pretty deep and hurt like a train would hurt a human. then the building fell on us and exploded.==<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc0\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday\"><\/a>Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc1\"><a name=\"x-&quot;Dawg, Dawg!&quot; Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. &quot;I'M AWAKE!&quot; I yelled. &quot;Do you always have to slap me?&quot; joey then said. &quot;No but I like to.&quot; How did you find me?&quot; i asked.&quot;The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.&quot; He started to cry. &quot;Joey I'm so sorry.&quot; I lied. &quot;It's okay&quot;, He said. &quot;i'm sure you didn't start the fire.&quot; okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. &quot;Oh and Dawg.&quot; said Joey. &quot;Yah.&quot; I asked. &quot;DIE!&quot; he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.\"><\/a>\"Dawg, Dawg!\" Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. \"I'M AWAKE!\" I yelled. \"Do you always have to slap me?\" joey then said. \"No but I like to.\" How did you find me?\" i asked.\"The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.\" He started to cry. \"Joey I'm so sorry.\" I lied. \"It's okay\", He said. \"i'm sure you didn't start the fire.\" okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. \"Oh and Dawg.\" said Joey. \"Yah.\" I asked. \"DIE!\" he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc2\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.\"><\/a>Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc3\"><a name=\"x-When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. &quot;Oh . . . peas.&quot;said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. &quot;Whoa.&quot;I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.&quot;Awesome.&quot; I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. &quot;I'll be home in a year.&quot; i said and i took off for home.\"><\/a>When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. \"Oh . . . peas.\"said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. \"Whoa.\"I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.\"Awesome.\" I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. \"I'll be home in a year.\" i said and i took off for home.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc4\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.\"><\/a>Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc5\"><a name=\"x-&quot;I'm finally here!&quot; I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. &quot;NO!!!&quot; I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. &quot;Dawg!&quot; she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.\"><\/a>\"I'm finally here!\" I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. \"NO!!!\" I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. \"Dawg!\" she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.<\/h2>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h1 id=\"toc6\"><a name=\"TO BE CONTINUED\"><\/a>TO BE CONTINUED<\/h1>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc7\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc8\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc9\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc10\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc11\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc12\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc13\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc14\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc15\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc16\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc17\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc18\"><\/h2>\n==","dateCreated":"1335302153","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/324791814?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"n axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. joey and madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name. who's rose?\" \"She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home\". I said. \"Oh,well, if your done screaming , i'm going to bed.\"said joey. \"Okay.\" I said. As he left madeline stood there watching me. \"What are you doing?\" I asked. \"Assessing the data I need to kill you.\" She answered. \"WHAT!\" I screamed. \"I'm going to kill you slowly and painfully.\" She replied. Then she pulled out a long, curved dagger. \"Oh.My.God!\" I yelled. Then I Sprung up and Ninja kicked her in the face. \"OW!\" she said. \"Why are you going to kill me! I demanded. \"3 reasons\". She said. \"First, I'm getting paid. Second, I am Determined to avenge the Supreme Fighter. And third, YOU KICKED ME!\" She said. \"Oh man.\" I said. I jumped out my window screaming. Now I'm 5 times faster than an average human, so Madeline must have been genetically engineered or something because she caught up with me pretty fast. Then I jumped, Which I can jump 50 times higher than a Dolphin so I landed on a pretty tall building. I thought I was safe, until she scaled the wall. So I ran into the buildings skylight. She followed me, Bad move. Why? You ask because it was the army's C4 factory. So now all I had to was find a way to get at least one thing of C4 to explode on the big column and the building will crash right on her. it'll crash on me to but I can withhold the crash, it's the explosion that'll really hurt me.As soon as she landed I grabbed a C4 and threw it at her. She hit it away, but not fast enough for it not to sense her hand. And it exploded as soon as it hit the column. \"You Idiot!\" screamed Madeline. the building crashed, but not soon enough for her not to throw her knife at me. It hit my right side of my upper torso, it was pretty deep and hurt like a train would hurt a human. Then the building fell on us and exploded.==<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc0\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday\"><\/a>Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc1\"><a name=\"x-&quot;Dawg, Dawg!&quot; Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. &quot;I'M AWAKE!&quot; I yelled. &quot;Do you always have to slap me?&quot; joey then said. &quot;No but I like to.&quot; How did you find me?&quot; i asked.&quot;The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.&quot; He started to cry. &quot;Joey I'm so sorry.&quot; I lied. &quot;It's okay&quot;, He said. &quot;i'm sure you didn't start the fire.&quot; okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. &quot;Oh and Dawg.&quot; said Joey. &quot;Yah.&quot; I asked. &quot;DIE!&quot; he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.\"><\/a>\"Dawg, Dawg!\" Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. \"I'M AWAKE!\" I yelled. \"Do you always have to slap me?\" joey then said. \"No but I like to.\" How did you find me?\" i asked.\"The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.\" He started to cry. \"Joey I'm so sorry.\" I lied. \"It's okay\", He said. \"i'm sure you didn't start the fire.\" okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. \"Oh and Dawg.\" said Joey. \"Yah.\" I asked. \"DIE!\" he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc2\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.\"><\/a>Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc3\"><a name=\"x-When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. &quot;Oh . . . peas.&quot;said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. &quot;Whoa.&quot;I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.&quot;Awesome.&quot; I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. &quot;I'll be home in a year.&quot; i said and i took off for home.\"><\/a>When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. \"Oh . . . peas.\"said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. \"Whoa.\"I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.\"Awesome.\" I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. \"I'll be home in a year.\" i said and i took off for home.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc4\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.\"><\/a>Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc5\"><a name=\"x-&quot;I'm finally here!&quot; I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. &quot;NO!!!&quot; I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. &quot;Dawg!&quot; she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.\"><\/a>\"I'm finally here!\" I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. \"NO!!!\" I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. \"Dawg!\" she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.<\/h2>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h1 id=\"toc6\"><a name=\"TO BE CONTINUED\"><\/a>TO BE CONTINUED<\/h1>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc7\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc8\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc9\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc10\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc11\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc12\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc13\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc14\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc15\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc16\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc17\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc18\"><\/h2>\n==","dateCreated":"1335302471","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/324793726?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"n axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. joey and madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name. who's rose?\" \"She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home\". I said. \"Oh,well, if your done screaming , i'm going to bed.\"said joey. \"Okay.\" I said. As he left madeline stood there watching me. \"What are you doing?\" I asked. \"Assessing the data I need to kill you.\" She answered. \"WHAT!\" I screamed. \"I'm going to kill you slowly and painfully.\" She replied. Then she pulled out a long, curved dagger. \"Oh.My.God!\" I yelled. Then I Sprung up and Ninja kicked her in the face. \"OW!\" she said. \"Why are you going to kill me! I demanded. \"3 reasons\". She said. \"First, I'm getting paid. Second, I am Determined to avenge the Supreme Fighter. And third, YOU KICKED ME!\" She said. \"Oh man.\" I said. I jumped out my window screaming. Now I'm 5 times faster than an average human, so Madeline must have been genetically engineered or something because she caught up with me pretty fast. Then I jumped, Which I can jump 50 times higher than a Dolphin so I landed on a pretty tall building. I thought I was safe, until she scaled the wall. So I ran into the buildings skylight. She followed me, Bad move. Why? You ask because it was the army's C4 factory. So now all I had to was find a way to get at least one thing of C4 to explode on the big column and the building will crash right on her. it'll crash on me to but I can withhold the crash, it's the explosion that'll really hurt me.As soon as she landed I grabbed a C4 and threw it at her. She hit it away, but not fast enough for it not to sense her hand. And it exploded as soon as it hit the column. \"You Idiot!\" screamed Madeline. the building crashed, but not soon enough for her not to throw her knife at me. It hit my right side of my upper torso, it was pretty deep and hurt like a train would hurt a human. Then the building fell on us and exploded.==<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc0\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday\"><\/a>Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc1\"><a name=\"x-&quot;Dawg, Dawg!&quot; Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. &quot;I'M AWAKE!&quot; I yelled. &quot;Do you always have to slap me?&quot; joey then said. &quot;No but I like to.&quot; How did you find me?&quot; i asked.&quot;The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.&quot; He started to cry. &quot;Joey I'm so sorry.&quot; I lied. &quot;It's okay&quot;, He said. &quot;i'm sure you didn't start the fire.&quot; okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. &quot;Oh and Dawg.&quot; said Joey. &quot;Yah.&quot; I asked. &quot;DIE!&quot; he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.\"><\/a>\"Dawg, Dawg!\" Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. \"I'M AWAKE!\" I yelled. \"Do you always have to slap me?\" joey then said. \"No but I like to.\" How did you find me?\" i asked.\"The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.\" He started to cry. \"Joey I'm so sorry.\" I lied. \"It's okay\", He said. \"i'm sure you didn't start the fire.\" okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. \"Oh and Dawg.\" said Joey. \"Yah.\" I asked. \"DIE!\" he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc2\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.\"><\/a>Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc3\"><a name=\"x-When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. &quot;Oh . . . peas.&quot;said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. &quot;Whoa.&quot;I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.&quot;Awesome.&quot; I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. &quot;I'll be home in a year.&quot; i said and i took off for home.\"><\/a>When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. \"Oh . . . peas.\"said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. \"Whoa.\"I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.\"Awesome.\" I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. \"I'll be home in a year.\" i said and i took off for home.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc4\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.\"><\/a>Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc5\"><a name=\"x-&quot;I'm finally here!&quot; I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. &quot;NO!!!&quot; I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. &quot;Dawg!&quot; she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.\"><\/a>\"I'm finally here!\" I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. \"NO!!!\" I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. \"Dawg!\" she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.<\/h2>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h1 id=\"toc6\"><a name=\"TO BE CONTINUED\"><\/a>TO BE CONTINUED<\/h1>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc7\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc8\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc9\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc10\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc11\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc12\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc13\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc14\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc15\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc16\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc17\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc18\"><\/h2>\n==","dateCreated":"1335388435","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/325241978?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"n axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. joey and madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name. who's rose?\" \"She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home\". I said. \"Oh,well, if your done screaming , i'm going to bed.\"said joey. \"Okay.\" I said. As he left madeline stood there watching me. \"What are you doing?\" I asked. \"Assessing the data I need to kill you.\" She answered. \"WHAT!\" I screamed. \"I'm going to kill you slowly and painfully.\" She replied. Then she pulled out a long, curved dagger. \"Oh.My.God!\" I yelled. Then I Sprung up and Ninja kicked her in the face. \"OW!\" she said. \"Why are you going to kill me! I demanded. \"3 reasons\". She said. \"First, I'm getting paid. Second, I am Determined to avenge the Supreme Fighter. And third, YOU KICKED ME!\" She said. \"Oh man.\" I said. I jumped out my window screaming. Now I'm 5 times faster than an average human, so Madeline must have been genetically engineered or something because she caught up with me pretty fast. Then I jumped, Which I can jump 50 times higher than a Dolphin so I landed on a pretty tall building. I thought I was safe, until she scaled the wall. So I ran into the buildings skylight. She followed me, Bad move. Why? You ask because it was the army's C4 factory. So now all I had to was find a way to get at least one thing of C4 to explode on the big column and the building will crash right on her. it'll crash on me to but I can withhold the crash, it's the explosion that'll really hurt me.As soon as she landed I grabbed a C4 and threw it at her. She hit it away, but not fast enough for it not to sense her hand. And it exploded as soon as it hit the column. \"You Idiot!\" screamed Madeline. the building crashed, but not soon enough for her not to throw her knife at me. It hit my right side of my upper torso, it was pretty deep and hurt like a train would hurt a human. Then the building fell on us and exploded.==<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc0\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday\"><\/a>Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc1\"><a name=\"x-&quot;Dawg, Dawg!&quot; Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. &quot;I'M AWAKE!&quot; I yelled. &quot;Do you always have to slap me?&quot; joey then said. &quot;No but I like to.&quot; How did you find me?&quot; i asked.&quot;The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.&quot; He started to cry. &quot;Joey I'm so sorry.&quot; I lied. &quot;It's okay&quot;, He said. &quot;i'm sure you didn't start the fire.&quot; okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. &quot;Oh and Dawg.&quot; said Joey. &quot;Yah.&quot; I asked. &quot;DIE!&quot; he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.\"><\/a>\"Dawg, Dawg!\" Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. \"I'M AWAKE!\" I yelled. \"Do you always have to slap me?\" joey then said. \"No but I like to.\" How did you find me?\" i asked.\"The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.\" He started to cry. \"Joey I'm so sorry.\" I lied. \"It's okay\", He said. \"i'm sure you didn't start the fire.\" okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. \"Oh and Dawg.\" said Joey. \"Yah.\" I asked. \"DIE!\" he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc2\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.\"><\/a>Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc3\"><a name=\"x-When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. &quot;Oh . . . peas.&quot;said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. &quot;Whoa.&quot;I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.&quot;Awesome.&quot; I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. &quot;I'll be home in a year.&quot; i said and i took off for home.\"><\/a>When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. \"Oh . . . peas.\"said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. \"Whoa.\"I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.\"Awesome.\" I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. \"I'll be home in a year.\" i said and i took off for home.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc4\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.\"><\/a>Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc5\"><a name=\"x-&quot;I'm finally here!&quot; I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. &quot;NO!!!&quot; I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. &quot;Dawg!&quot; she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.\"><\/a>\"I'm finally here!\" I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. \"NO!!!\" I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. \"Dawg!\" she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.<\/h2>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h1 id=\"toc6\"><a name=\"TO BE CONTINUED\"><\/a>TO BE CONTINUED<\/h1>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc7\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc8\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc9\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc10\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc11\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc12\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc13\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc14\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc15\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc16\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc17\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc18\"><\/h2>\n==","dateCreated":"1336335042","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/330758864?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\u200dn axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. joey and madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name. who's rose?\" \"She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home\". I said. \"Oh,well, if your done screaming , i'm going to bed.\"said joey. \"Okay.\" I said. As he left madeline stood there watching me. \"What are you doing?\" I asked. \"Assessing the data I need to kill you.\" She answered. \"WHAT!\" I screamed. \"I'm going to kill you slowly and painfully.\" She replied. Then she pulled out a long, curved dagger. \"Oh.My.God!\" I yelled. Then I Sprung up and Ninja kicked her in the face. \"OW!\" she said. \"Why are you going to kill me! I demanded. \"3 reasons\". She said. \"First, I'm getting paid. Second, I am Determined to avenge the Supreme Fighter. And third, YOU KICKED ME!\" She said. \"Oh man.\" I said. I jumped out my window screaming. Now I'm 5 times faster than an average human, so Madeline must have been genetically engineered or something because she caught up with me pretty fast. Then I jumped, Which I can jump 50 times higher than a Dolphin so I landed on a pretty tall building. I thought I was safe, until she scaled the wall. So I ran into the buildings skylight. She followed me, Bad move. Why? You ask because it was the army's C4 factory. So now all I had to was find a way to get at least one thing of C4 to explode on the big column and the building will crash right on her. it'll crash on me to but I can withhold the crash, it's the explosion that'll really hurt me.As soon as she landed I grabbed a C4 and threw it at her. She hit it away, but not fast enough for it not to sense her hand. And it exploded as soon as it hit the column. \"You Idiot!\" screamed Madeline. the building crashed, but not soon enough for her not to throw her knife at me. It hit my right side of my upper torso, it was pretty deep and hurt like a train would hurt a human. Then the building fell on us and exploded.==<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc0\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday\"><\/a>Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc1\"><a name=\"x-&quot;Dawg, Dawg!&quot; Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. &quot;I'M AWAKE!&quot; I yelled. &quot;Do you always have to slap me?&quot; joey then said. &quot;No but I like to.&quot; How did you find me?&quot; i asked.&quot;The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.&quot; He started to cry. &quot;Joey I'm so sorry.&quot; I lied. &quot;It's okay&quot;, He said. &quot;i'm sure you didn't start the fire.&quot; okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. &quot;Oh and Dawg.&quot; said Joey. &quot;Yah.&quot; I asked. &quot;DIE!&quot; he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.\"><\/a>\"Dawg, Dawg!\" Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. \"I'M AWAKE!\" I yelled. \"Do you always have to slap me?\" joey then said. \"No but I like to.\" How did you find me?\" i asked.\"The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.\" He started to cry. \"Joey I'm so sorry.\" I lied. \"It's okay\", He said. \"i'm sure you didn't start the fire.\" okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. \"Oh and Dawg.\" said Joey. \"Yah.\" I asked. \"DIE!\" he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc2\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.\"><\/a>Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc3\"><a name=\"x-When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. &quot;Oh . . . peas.&quot;said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. &quot;Whoa.&quot;I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.&quot;Awesome.&quot; I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. &quot;I'll be home in a year.&quot; i said and i took off for home.\"><\/a>When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. \"Oh . . . peas.\"said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. \"Whoa.\"I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.\"Awesome.\" I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. \"I'll be home in a year.\" i said and i took off for home.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc4\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.\"><\/a>Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc5\"><a name=\"x-&quot;I'm finally here!&quot; I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. &quot;NO!!!&quot; I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. &quot;Dawg!&quot; she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.\"><\/a>\"I'm finally here!\" I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. \"NO!!!\" I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. \"Dawg!\" she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.<\/h2>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h1 id=\"toc6\"><a name=\"TO BE CONTINUED\"><\/a>TO BE CONTINUED<\/h1>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc7\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc8\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc9\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc10\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc11\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc12\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc13\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc14\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc15\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc16\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc17\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc18\"><\/h2>\n==","dateCreated":"1336501546","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/331987904?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\u200d\u200dn axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. Joey and Madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name.Who's Rose?\" \"She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home\". I said. \"Oh,well, if your done screaming , I'm going to bed,\"said Joey. \"Okay.\" I said. As he left Madeline stood there watching me. \"What are you doing?\" I asked. \"Assessing the data I need to kill you,\" She answered. \"WHAT!\" I screamed. \"I'm going to kill you slowly and painfully,\" She replied. Then she pulled out a long, curved dagger. \"Oh.My.God!\" I yelled. Then I sprung up and ninja kicked her in the face. \"OW!\" she said. \"Why are you going to kill me! I demanded. \"3 reasons,\" she said. \"First, I'm getting paid. Second, I am Determined to avenge the Supreme Fighter. And third, YOU KICKED ME!\" She said. \"Oh man,\" I said. I jumped out my window screaming. Now I'm 5 times faster than an average human, so Madeline must have been genetically engineered or something because she caught up with me pretty fast. Then I jumped, Which I can jump 50 times higher than a Dolphin so I landed on a pretty tall building. I thought I was safe, until she scaled the wall. So I ran into the buildings skylight. She followed me, bad move. Why? You ask because it was the army's claymore factory. So now all I had to was find a way to get a claymore to explode the big column and the building will crash right on her. it'll crash on me too but I can withhold the crash, it's the explosion that'll really hurt me.As soon as she landed I grabbed a Claymore and threw it at her. She hit it away, but not fast enough for it not to sense her hand. And it exploded as soon as it hit the column. \"You Idiot!\" screamed Madeline. the building crashed, but not soon enough for her not to throw her knife at me. It hit my right side of my upper torso, it was pretty deep and hurt like a train would hurt a human. Then the building fell on us and exploded.==<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc0\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday\"><\/a>Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc1\"><a name=\"x-&quot;Dawg, Dawg!&quot; Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. I still didn't wake up so what did Joey do? Slapped me, hard. &quot;I'M AWAKE!&quot; I yelled. &quot;Do you always have to slap me?&quot; Joey then said. &quot;No but I like to.&quot; How did you find me?&quot; i asked.&quot;The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.&quot; He started to cry. &quot;Joey I'm so sorry.&quot; I lied. &quot;It's okay&quot;, He said. &quot;i'm sure you didn't start the fire.&quot; okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. &quot;Oh and Dawg.&quot; said Joey. &quot;Yah.&quot; I asked. &quot;DIE!&quot; he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.\"><\/a>\"Dawg, Dawg!\" Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. I still didn't wake up so what did Joey do? Slapped me, hard. \"I'M AWAKE!\" I yelled. \"Do you always have to slap me?\" Joey then said. \"No but I like to.\" How did you find me?\" i asked.\"The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.\" He started to cry. \"Joey I'm so sorry.\" I lied. \"It's okay\", He said. \"i'm sure you didn't start the fire.\" okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. \"Oh and Dawg.\" said Joey. \"Yah.\" I asked. \"DIE!\" he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc2\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.\"><\/a>Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc3\"><a name=\"x-When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. &quot;Oh . . . peas.&quot;said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. &quot;Whoa.&quot;I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.&quot;Awesome.&quot; I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. &quot;I'll be home in a year.&quot; i said and i took off for home.\"><\/a>When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. \"Oh . . . peas.\"said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. \"Whoa.\"I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.\"Awesome.\" I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. \"I'll be home in a year.\" i said and i took off for home.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc4\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.\"><\/a>Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc5\"><a name=\"x-&quot;I'm finally here!&quot; I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. &quot;NO!!!&quot; I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. &quot;Dawg!&quot; she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.\"><\/a>\"I'm finally here!\" I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. \"NO!!!\" I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. \"Dawg!\" she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.<\/h2>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h1 id=\"toc6\"><a name=\"TO BE CONTINUED\"><\/a>TO BE CONTINUED<\/h1>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc7\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc8\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc9\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc10\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc11\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc12\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc13\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc14\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc15\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc16\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc17\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc18\"><\/h2>\n==","dateCreated":"1336503457","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/332006564?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\u200d\u200dn axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. Joey and Madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name.Who's Rose?\" \"She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home\". I said. \"Oh,well, if your done screaming , I'm going to bed,\"said Joey. \"Okay.\" I said. As he left Madeline stood there watching me. \"What are you doing?\" I asked. \"Assessing the data I need to kill you,\" She answered. \"WHAT!\" I screamed. \"I'm going to kill you slowly and painfully,\" She replied. Then she pulled out a long, curved dagger. \"Oh.My.God!\" I yelled. Then I sprung up and ninja kicked her in the face. \"OW!\" she said. \"Why are you going to kill me! I demanded. \"3 reasons,\" she said. \"First, I'm getting paid. Second, I am Determined to avenge the Supreme Fighter. And third, YOU KICKED ME!\" She said. \"Oh man,\" I said. I jumped out my window screaming. Now I'm 5 times faster than an average human, so Madeline must have been genetically engineered or something because she caught up with me pretty fast. Then I jumped, Which I can jump 50 times higher than a Dolphin so I landed on a pretty tall building. I thought I was safe, until she scaled the wall. So I ran into the buildings skylight. She followed me, bad move. Why? You ask because it was the army's claymore factory. So now all I had to was find a way to get a claymore to explode the big column and the building will crash right on her. it'll crash on me too but I can withhold the crash, it's the explosion that'll really hurt me.As soon as she landed I grabbed a Claymore and threw it at her. She hit it away, but not fast enough for it not to sense her hand. And it exploded as soon as it hit the column. \"You Idiot!\" screamed Madeline. the building crashed, but not soon enough for her not to throw her knife at me. It hit my right side of my upper torso, it was pretty deep and hurt like a train would hurt a human. Then the building fell on us and exploded.==<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc0\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday\"><\/a>Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc1\"><a name=\"x-&quot;Dawg, Dawg!&quot; Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. I still didn't wake up so what did Joey do? Slapped me, hard. &quot;I'M AWAKE!&quot; I yelled. &quot;Do you always have to slap me?&quot; Joey then said. &quot;No but I like to.&quot; How did you find me?&quot; i asked.&quot;The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.&quot; He started to cry. &quot;Joey I'm so sorry.&quot; I lied. &quot;It's okay&quot;, He said. &quot;i'm sure you didn't start the fire.&quot; okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. &quot;Oh and Dawg.&quot; said Joey. &quot;Yah.&quot; I asked. &quot;DIE!&quot; he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.\"><\/a>\"Dawg, Dawg!\" Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. I still didn't wake up so what did Joey do? Slapped me, hard. \"I'M AWAKE!\" I yelled. \"Do you always have to slap me?\" Joey then said. \"No but I like to.\" How did you find me?\" i asked.\"The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.\" He started to cry. \"Joey I'm so sorry.\" I lied. \"It's okay\", He said. \"i'm sure you didn't start the fire.\" okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. \"Oh and Dawg.\" said Joey. \"Yah.\" I asked. \"DIE!\" he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc2\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.\"><\/a>Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc3\"><a name=\"x-When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. &quot;Oh . . . peas.&quot;said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. &quot;Whoa.&quot;I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.&quot;Awesome.&quot; I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. &quot;I'll be home in a year.&quot; i said and i took off for home.\"><\/a>When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. \"Oh . . . peas.\"said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. \"Whoa.\"I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.\"Awesome.\" I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. \"I'll be home in a year.\" i said and i took off for home.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc4\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.\"><\/a>Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc5\"><a name=\"x-&quot;I'm finally here!&quot; I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. &quot;NO!!!&quot; I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. &quot;Dawg!&quot; she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.\"><\/a>\"I'm finally here!\" I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. \"NO!!!\" I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. \"Dawg!\" she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.<\/h2>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h1 id=\"toc6\"><a name=\"TO BE CONTINUED\"><\/a>TO BE CONTINUED<\/h1>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc7\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc8\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc9\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc10\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc11\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc12\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc13\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc14\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc15\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc16\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc17\"><\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc18\"><\/h2>\n==","dateCreated":"1336503467","user":{"username":"AI3055","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AI3055","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1348586107\/AI3055-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Narrative+essay\/332006626?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\u200d\u200dn axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. Joey and Madeline were watching me. \"Are you all right?\" Asked Joey. \"We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name.Who's Rose?\" \"She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home\". I said. \"Oh,well, if your done screaming , I'm going to bed,\"said Joey. \"Okay.\" I said. As he left Madeline stood there watching me. \"What are you doing?\" I asked. \"Assessing the data I need to kill you,\" She answered. \"WHAT!\" I screamed. \"I'm going to kill you slowly and painfully,\" She replied. Then she pulled out a long, curved dagger. \"Oh.My.God!\" I yelled. Then I sprung up and ninja kicked her in the face. \"OW!\" she said. \"Why are you going to kill me! I demanded. \"3 reasons,\" she said. \"First, I'm getting paid. Second, I am Determined to avenge the Supreme Fighter. And third, YOU KICKED ME!\" She said. \"Oh man,\" I said. I jumped out my window screaming. Now I'm 5 times faster than an average human, so Madeline must have been genetically engineered or something because she caught up with me pretty fast. Then I jumped, Which I can jump 50 times higher than a Dolphin so I landed on a pretty tall building. I thought I was safe, until she scaled the wall. So I ran into the buildings skylight. She followed me, bad move. Why? You ask because it was the army's claymore factory. So now all I had to was find a way to get a claymore to explode the big column and the building will crash right on her. it'll crash on me too but I can withhold the crash, it's the explosion that'll really hurt me.As soon as she landed I grabbed a Claymore and threw it at her. She hit it away, but not fast enough for it not to sense her hand. And it exploded as soon as it hit the column. \"You Idiot!\" screamed Madeline. the building crashed, but not soon enough for her not to throw her knife at me. It hit my right side of my upper torso, it was pretty deep and hurt like a train would hurt a human. Then the building fell on us and exploded.==<br \/>\n<h2 id=\"toc0\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday\"><\/a>Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc1\"><a name=\"x-&quot;Dawg, Dawg!&quot; Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. I still didn't wake up so what did Joey do? Slapped me, hard. &quot;I'M AWAKE!&quot; I yelled. &quot;Do you always have to slap me?&quot; Joey then said. &quot;No but I like to.&quot; How did you find me?&quot; I asked.&quot;The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.&quot; He started to cry. &quot;Joey I'm so sorry,&quot; I lied. &quot;It's okay,&quot; he said. &quot;I'm sure you didn't start the fire.&quot; Okay, now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. &quot;Oh and Dawg,&quot; said Joey. &quot;Yah.&quot; I asked. &quot;DIE!&quot; He pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.\"><\/a>\"Dawg, Dawg!\" Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. I still didn't wake up so what did Joey do? Slapped me, hard. \"I'M AWAKE!\" I yelled. \"Do you always have to slap me?\" Joey then said. \"No but I like to.\" How did you find me?\" I asked.\"The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it.\" He started to cry. \"Joey I'm so sorry,\" I lied. \"It's okay,\" he said. \"I'm sure you didn't start the fire.\" Okay, now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. \"Oh and Dawg,\" said Joey. \"Yah.\" I asked. \"DIE!\" He pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc2\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.\"><\/a>Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc3\"><a name=\"x-When I got to my beach house I strapped Joey into a battery and found the closest lake. &quot;Oh . . . peas.&quot;said joey. I think he said &quot;no please&quot; but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. &quot;Whoa.&quot;I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.&quot;Awesome.&quot; I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an Armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. &quot;I'll be home in a year.&quot; I said and I took off for home.\"><\/a>When I got to my beach house I strapped Joey into a battery and found the closest lake. \"Oh . . . peas.\"said joey. I think he said \"no please\" but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. \"Whoa.\"I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser.\"Awesome.\" I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an Armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. \"I'll be home in a year.\" I said and I took off for home.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc4\"><a name=\"x-Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.\"><\/a>Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.<\/h2>\n<h2 id=\"toc5\"><a name=\"x-&quot;I'm finally here!&quot; I said when I got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. &quot;NO!!!&quot; I yelled. I slammed my hand on a wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice. I turned around and saw an Armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my Awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. &quot;Dawg!&quot; she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what Armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.\"><\/a>\"I'm finally here!\" I said when I got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. \"NO!!!\" I yelled. I slammed my hand on a wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice. I turned around and saw an Armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my Awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. \"Dawg!\" she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what Armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. 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