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Meet Ryan Monahan. He was born on June 17, 2000. In Sioux Falls, SD. He has a mom and a dad. He has no brothers, but two sisters. He also has three faithful dogs.
Ryan Likes many ports. Some examples are basketball, Football, and biking. He spends a lot of money. A few of his favorite foods are at Boscos and Wendy's. And you could find most of his favorite music at 103.7.
is his Dad,Dad Because he's his dad. Doesn't need much more a reason.dad , and he's there for him, plus he has lots of trucks.
Ryan doesn't Have a good memory of sixth Grade.His advice for next years sixth graders is "get your homework done." His only excitement about next year is that he'll be one year closer to Freedom.
Some of his wishes for the future is to have no wife. He wants to have three plane hangars for his cars.And his own restoration shop. Pretty cool, huh.

"Finally," said joey as he got off the jet. I yawned and sa‍‍id, "Hey‍‍ guys I'm going to hit the hay, okay?" "Yah sure thing," ‍‍Said Madeline in her paralyzing voice. I crawled inside my beach house and under the covers, then had a weird dream,‍‍ ‍‍I was running from Madeline. when she caught up she exploded.‍‍ J‍‍oey appeared after that. He was in an electrified lake, slowly getting fried.‍‍ Then I saw Rose standing there reaching for me. She was falling. I called her name but my voice wasn't working. Then I saw a person I would never want to see, it was Leo, king of Armytopia. he was holding a‍‍n axe and I saw me, tied and forced to my knees, he swung the axe and I screamed. I awoke, screaming my head off. Joey and Madeline were watching me. "Are you all right?" Asked Joey. "We heard you screaming all the way from outside, saying a girls name.Who's Rose?" "She . . . she was an old friend I had at my old home". I said. "Oh,well, if your done screaming , I'm going to bed,"said Joey. "Okay." I said. As he left Madeline stood there watching me. "What are you doing?" I asked. "Assessing the data I need to kill you," She answered. "WHAT!" I screamed. "I'm going to kill you slowly and painfully," She replied. Then she pulled out a long, curved dagger. "Oh.My.God!" I yelled. Then I sprung up and ninja kicked her in the face. "OW!" she said. "Why are you going to kill me! I demanded. "3 reasons," she said. "First, I'm getting paid. Second, I am Determined to avenge the Supreme Fighter. And third, YOU KICKED ME!" She said. "Oh man," I said. I jumped out my window screaming. Now I'm 5 times faster than an average human, so Madeline must have been genetically engineered or something because she caught up with me pretty fast. Then I jumped, Which I can jump 50 times higher than a Dolphin so I landed on a pretty tall building. I thought I was safe, until she scaled the wall. So I ran into the buildings skylight. She followed me, bad move. Why? You ask because it was the army's claymore factory. So now all I had to was find a way to get a claymore to explode the big column and the building will crash right on her. it'll crash on me too but I can withhold the crash, it's the explosion that'll really hurt me.As soon as she landed I grabbed a Claymore and threw it at her. She hit it away, but not fast enough for it not to sense her hand. And it exploded as soon as it hit the column. "You Idiot!" screamed Madeline. the building crashed, but not soon enough for her not to throw her knife at me. It hit my right side of my upper torso, it was pretty deep and hurt like a train would hurt a human. Then the building fell on us and exploded.
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find me?" iI asked."The fire I'm so sorry."sorry," I lied. "It's okay", Heokay," he said. "i'm"I'm sure you the fire." okayOkay, now I "Oh and Dawg."Dawg," said Joey. asked. "DIE!" heHe pulled out
Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.
I strapped joeyJoey into a he said no please"no please" but I had an armtopianArmtopian vehicle. So a year." iI said and iI took off
Chapter 6 [planet Awesomesauce] {5 months till invasion} 12:00 p.m., Sunday.
said when iI got off I yelled. iI slammed my on a crumpled wall so an unfamiliar voicevoice. I turned saw an armytopianArmytopian guard running with my awesomesauceianAwesomesauceian army class know what armytopiaArmytopia does to
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Adam,
Please fix these comments and then I will continue looking over the rest of the essay. Please email me or let me know when you have these changes made so I know to continue. Your final draft will be due Thursday of this week, so make sure to fix these comments soon. If you have questions, please ask me, and I can help you work on your revisions during study hall or before/after school.
‍"Dawg,‍‍"Dawg, no, you I told her‍.her‍‍. I turned ship blew u‍pu‍‍p and I‍I‍‍ was headed a different planet.‍planet.‍‍ Then I blown up. ‍Little‍‍Little did I supreme fighter.
Oh‍hh,
Oh‍‍hh, I groaned known as Earth.‍Earth.‍‍ On a section the earthlingsEarthlings call "Florida". thirty-twoThirty-Two years away
Hartford, SD. 18 [months[18 months till invasion] 31 years later‍ ‍later‍‍ ‍‍
"Hi Dawg." Said Joey.
for 27 ye‍ars.ye‍‍ars.
"So hows the new job?" he asked.
you know, sho‍otingsho‍‍oting bears and made complete hav‍oc!" s‍aidhav‍‍oc!" s‍‍aid Joey.
"We also made some pretty frightening corpses on the battlefield ." I said.
"‍I"‍‍I felt pretty had to leave."‍leave."‍‍ said Joey.
"Yah", I said, "Hey you wanna go on our monthly trip from Hartford to Florida? " "SURE!"replied Joey. "Hey can my new Girlfriend Madeline come too?" he asked. "Why?" I asked.
Because she's Purrty." he said. "Fine, .But she better not ruin my beach house."I said. "don't worry" ,he said, "she'll only break a window or two." my next reply was a bad one. "she can come if you really want her to." I said. "GREAT!" he screamed. "This'll be the best trip ever!" little did anyone know this was going to be a horrible trip.
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"have I jet?" asked joeyJoey when we he screamed, "and"And your just this beach house,house,Madeline it's got you love." ‍joey‍‍Joey wasn't kidding golden yellow color.‍‍color.‍‍‍‍ She had a female wresler.‍wresler.‍‍ And when a thousand mocking birdsmockingbirds singing in harmony‍.Litt‍leharmony‍‍.Litt‍‍le did I 3:15 a.m. thursday
"finally."Thursday
"Finally," said joey yawned and sa‍id, "hey‍sa‍‍id, "Hey‍‍ guys I'm "Yah sure thing." ‍Said madelinething," ‍‍Said Madeline in her a weird dream ever.‍ ‍Idream,‍‍ ‍‍I was running up she exploded.‍ J‍oeyexploded.‍‍ J‍‍oey appeared after that. heHe was in slowly getting fried.‍fried.‍‍ Then I saw roseRose standing there wasn't working. thenThen I saw it was leo,Leo, king of was holding a‍na‍‍n axe and head off. joeyJoey and madelineMadeline were watching a girls name. who's rose?"name.Who's Rose?" "She . screaming , i'mI'm going to bed."said joey.bed,"said Joey. "Okay." I he left madelineMadeline stood there to kill you."you," She answered. slowly and painfully."painfully," She replied. Then I Sprungsprung up and Ninjaninja kicked her demanded. "3 reasons". Shereasons," she said. "First, said. "Oh man."man," I said. followed me, Badbad move. Why? the army's C4claymore factory. So to get at least one thing of C4a claymore to explode on the big on me totoo but I grabbed a C4Claymore and threw
Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday
demanded Joey. iI still didn't what did joeyJoey do? slappedSlapped me, hard. slap me?" joeyJoey then said.
Chapter 5 [Florida] {17months till invasion} 8:00 p.m., Friday.
When I got to my beach house I strapped joey into a battery and found the closest lake. "Oh . . . peas."said joey. I think he said no please but I couldn't tell through his broken teeth. So I through him into the lake and saw sparks fly. "Whoa."I said as joey was getting fried.when I decided Joey was dead (along with a lot of fish) I decide to go back to Hartford. when I got there I saw Madeline's car. it was a 720 cruiser."Awesome." I said.I got in it. luckily she kept the keys in it so I started to fly. She had an armtopian vehicle. So it can go 31 times faster than an Awesomesauceian cruiser. "I'll be home in a year." i said and i took off for home.
"I'm finally here!" I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. "NO!!!" I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. "Dawg!" she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.
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Adam,
Please fix these comments and then I will continue looking over the rest of the essay. Please email me or let me know when you have these changes made so I know to continue. Your final draft will be due Thursday of this week, so make sure to fix these comments soon. If you have questions, please ask me, and I can help you work on your revisions during study hall or before/after school.
"Dawg,‍"Dawg, no, you I told her.her‍. I turned ship blew upu‍p and II‍ was headed a different planet.planet.‍ Then I bigger explosion, that was a sign that was blown up. Little‍Little did I supreme fighter.
Ohhh,
Oh‍hh, I groaned known as Earth.Earth.‍ On a 31 years later later‍ ‍
"Hi Dawg." Said Joey.
for 27 years.ye‍ars.
"So hows he asked. "Oh
"Oh you know, shootingsho‍oting bears and I said. "Yah,
"Yah, we were made complete havoc!" said Joey."Wehav‍oc!" s‍aid Joey.
"We also made I said. "I
"‍I felt pretty had to leave."leave."‍ said Joey. "Yah",
"Yah", I said, I asked. Because
Because she's Purrty." horrible trip.
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"have I you love." joey‍joey wasn't kidding golden yellow color.color.‍‍ She had a female wresler.wresler.‍ And when singing in harmony.Littleharmony‍.Litt‍le did I
Chapter 3 [Florida] {17 months until invasion} 3:15 a.m. thursday
yawned and said, "heysa‍id, "hey‍ guys I'm sure thing." Said‍Said madeline in weird dream ever. Iever.‍ ‍I was running up she exploded. Joeyexploded.‍ J‍oey appeared after slowly getting fried.fried.‍ Then I was holding ana‍n axe and
Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday
"Dawg, Dawg!" Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. "I'M AWAKE!" I yelled. "Do you always have to slap me?" joey then said. "No but I like to." How did you find me?" i asked."The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it." He started to cry. "Joey I'm so sorry." I lied. "It's okay", He said. "i'm sure you didn't start the fire." okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. "Oh and Dawg." said Joey. "Yah." I asked. "DIE!" he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.
"I'm finally here!" I said when i got off the ship. But what I saw was NOT my blissful old home. It was a sick and twisted version made by armytopia. "NO!!!" I yelled. i slammed my hand on a crumpled wall so hard it crumbled to dust. STOP! Intruder. yelled an unfamiliar voice I turned around and saw an armytopian guard running after me. He obviously never dealt with my awesomesauceian army class [which is the highest]. When he reached me I kneed him in the gut and kicked him over 1,000 football fields away. I turned around and saw a girl running up to me. "Dawg!" she yelled as soon as she caught up with me she hugged me. I hugged her back since I know what armytopia does to people they capture. then I saw her hair color, Red, There was only one awesomesaucian with red hair. It was Rose.
TO BE CONTINUED
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Adam,
Please fix these comments and then I will continue looking over the rest of the essay. Please email me or let me know when you have these changes made so I know to continue. Your final draft will be due Thursday of this week, so make sure to fix these comments soon. If you have questions, please ask me, and I can help you work on your revisions during study hall or before/after school.
"DAWG, NO, YOU CAN'T RAM INTO THE SUPREME FIGHTER!" Screamed"Dawg, no, you can't ram the Supreme Fighter !" screamed Rose as a bigger explosion.explosion, that was on planet 264.264, Also known as Earth. onOn a section earthlings call "florida". 32"Florida". thirty-two years away
Hartford, SD. 18 [months till invasion] 31 years later
Said Joey. "Sup
"Sup Joey." I 27 years. "So
"So hows the
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yellow color. HairShe had hair as black her that madememade me think about a female wresler..wresler. And when singing in harmony.littleharmony.Little did I
Chapter 3 [Florida] {17 months until invasion} 3:15 a.m. thursday
under the covers.covers, then had the weirdesta weird dream ever.
Chapter 4 [still Florida] {17 months till invasion} 7:48 a.m., Friday
"Dawg, Dawg!" Screamed Joey. I groaned but didn't awake. DAWG! demanded Joey. i still didn't wake up so what did joey do? slapped me, hard. "I'M AWAKE!" I yelled. "Do you always have to slap me?" joey then said. "No but I like to." How did you find me?" i asked."The fire station was putting out the fire and they found you and Madeline. I visited Madeline and. . . She didn't Make it." He started to cry. "Joey I'm so sorry." I lied. "It's okay", He said. "i'm sure you didn't start the fire." okay now I was starting to feel guilty. Joey started to leave. "Oh and Dawg." said Joey. "Yah." I asked. "DIE!" he pulled out the knife that punctured my body and took a stab at me. Luckily I'm fast or I would have taken a stab to the heart instead of my hand. I then punched him, in the face. As hard as I could. And I say I got a home run cause as soon as he landed I heard his spine crack. I got out of bed and walked after him. when I reached him his face was messed up. His teeth were either broken or had fallen out. his nose was misshapen. and his left eye was swollen so much that I almost forgot he was born with an eye and not a small hill. I grabbed him and headed towards my beach house.

Ryan Likes many ports. Some examples are basketball, Football, and biking. He spends a lot of money. A few of his favorite foods are at Boscos and Wendy's. And you could find most of his favorite music at 103.7.
One of his best character traits is his ability to be a good friend. Another is his sportiness. His role model is his Dad, Because he's his dad. Doesn't need much more a reason.
for next years sixth graders is "get your homework done." His only excitement about next year is that he'll be one year closer to Freedom.
Some of his wishes for the future is to have no wife. He wants to have three plane hangars for his cars.And his own restoration shop. Pretty cool, huh.
Well thats about it. But remember this. Ryan is an awesome friend. And if you know him, he'll usually be their for you.